Tuesday, March 15, 2011

LIFE - A Joke

Hello Life,
An emergency Message for you,
I've tried hard to read you,
But I find nothing special in you,
Everything is as bad as I've heard about you,
Now-a-days you are going to be more worst with every moment,
I don't know what to advice you...!!!

After realising every facts of your critical case,
I feel that you are nothing,
So, why you are here,
Why you are doing blasphemies,
I think you are pigging out here,
There is nothing for you here on this planet,
No one is here for you,
Probably, you should cease your existence.
There is no one,
who'll stop you from doing this...!!!

Hey life! I think you should give up living,
There is no one here for things like you,
This globe is for some others - not for you,
I know there is dark black around you,
You must be shivering with cold,
Heat is also passing through you,
Your present condition is like mild bloom.
And there is no way to escape from this,
This connote granty situation in every one's way,
You might be feeling spoiled out of life this time,
SO YOU SHOULD GIVE LIVING.
This is what i would like to say you...

You must be off now - completely busted and screwed,
You might going to be dull in future - I knew that,
YOU SHOULD GIVE UP,
BECAUSE YOU ARE NOTHING..NOTHING..NOTHING..NOTHING..
NO ONE WILL HELP YOU,
BECAUSE YOU ARE LOOSER..LOOSER..LOOSER...!!

4 comments:

  1. hello
    friend
    don't be pessimistic due to some exceptional cases of life.these are incorrigible moments which come and go like season, as a good writer your writings must be an evidence of optimism.

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  2. Dear Umesh
    I told you that it is a beautiful poem in itself. I accept that it speaks of pessimism in its full blown state but it also brings out the real and honest Umesh through dark words. I hope for a bright future for my friend and brother. May your compositions find light and speak of hope and life in future...
    Bye
    keep writing...

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  3. Thanks Anamika...

    Mohit,
    First of all thank you so much for your such a huge and surprised appraisal. I think, this composition is not decided, as you know it very well. But, it comes at a point where my life underwent with tragic scenes of incompetence in passion. i don't know about others, but, i think this is my part of pleasure of gratification of being in sad state. I would be happy, if there are lots of more were in store for me.
    thankssss

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  4. Dear Umesh
    It is really a very beautiful poem. I can understand your situation very well. It's maybe because I am also quite in the same phase.
    A lot of things go unquestioned,
    A lot of questions go unanswered,
    A lot of words go unsaid,
    Some go unheard,
    Some dreams are buried alive,
    but still we call it 'LIFE'.....
    keep writing....bye

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